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    SomeGuy

    Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/08/08 | Reply

    Total agreement with Red; best opening line ever.

    I never stayed in the nurses' office very much in school; just once in-between classes when a guy burned me with a heated pen (go fig). That said, hearing you mention student prescriptions in the office made me twitch a little. Like, it makes perfect sense but it's just another one of those "that was never the case in my day, but I can see how it could be at that point now" things. But I digress.

    I'm liking these characters so far and I definitely wanna know a bit more about what happened at the Spelling Bee; heh, benefits of the short story writer in that you don't have to fill those kinds of things in, nya?

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    bellpickle

    Pickle of the Year (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/08/08 | Reply

    If I could give this a thumbs up, I would. :3

    Nice little piece; very readable.

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    red tigress

    Raid Boss (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/08/08 | Reply

    Best opening line ever. Haha, I could totally emphasize with Seb. Pretty cool! I hate nurses' offices though, but you made this one an interesting read, so nice!